i wrote today's english diary. So i want u guys correct my english diary.. haha. please feel free to correct the wrong sentences. If there is more better sentences plz let me know!! 2017.07.19 It was one of the most busiest day recently. Because I did a l (2024)

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@marin_811 Today it was one of the busiest days because I did a lot of things.
First of all, I had to wake up early at 10am. Basically, I spent half an hour doing my make up and my hair.
Then, my mom gave me a ride to the cafe, which was really impressive.
I've been preparing to open A cafe next month.
We found A gorgeous and modern cafe and it didn't disappoint me.
She said the class ended around 1pm.
So I went there and waited for her while using my laptop.
At 4pm there was AN important training.
Today's training was a meaningful one because I kept asking how to make my own menu "special" and they didn't stop giving me advice.
That was my day and then I came home to have some rest.

I just corrected some grammar things, hope it helps :)

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2017. 07. 19
I had the busiest day today, because I did a lot of things.
First of all, I had to wake up early at 10 am.
I spent half an hour getting ready. I spent that time doing my make-up, hair and other things like that.
My mom gave me a ride to the café, which I am really proud of. I've been preparing to open a cafe for a month now, so I've been looking at a lot of other cafes for inspiration. Yesterday I was at 상수동 with my GF and we found a gorgeous modern café. That café not only had an exterior but also a well matched interior, so I decided to copy that café.
After that I went to Hongik university to meet with my GF. She said her class ends around 1pm. I went to the school cafeteria because it was too hot outside today, so I waited for her in the cafeteria while I used my laptop. We went to a famous BBQ restaurant that is around Hogdae station. I was pissed off because of the crazy weather. Anyway, after we finished lunch I took her back home at 4pm. There was important training at the coffee company, so I went there by subway and worked really hard. The training was meaningful today because people were giving me advice about my coffee menu. That was my day today, and now I am at home resting.